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Response to Project 3 Essay

Posted by srikar99 on June 5, 2014 at 10:10 PM

The thesis statement for this essay appears to be one sentence which presents a list of what will be talked about. The subtitles of this essay are directly relevant to the thesis statement since they are exactly what was listed in the thesis.

 

These subtitles are arranged in a logical order with introductions and backstory starting in the beginning. The body sections of this essay discuss what must be done to complete this major at MSU and the benefits of having his major. There is also a section dedicated to explaining how writing affects his major. The final sections discuss what his future goals and aspirations are and how his major will help him. The sections are primaly told without using personal examples which is understandable as the author is a Freshman at MSU. There were a surprisingly few citations used in the works cited section. These sources all seem to be quoted in the correct format according to MLA.

 

Though the conclusion is short, it is able to wrap up the essay effectively. It summarizes the author's interest in Soanish and explains why he wanted to select this major at MSU. This essay is definetly audience friendly. It not only explains why students should choosing Spanish in layman's terms, but it also presents them in a logical and clear fashion.

 

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