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   The thesis statement for this essay appears to have a lengthy thesis about eleven sentences long. The first sentence introduces what the essay will be about in general and each of the other ten sentences talk about what each section of the essay will discuss. The subtitles of this essay are directly relevant to the thesis statement since the thesis explained what each section will be about.

   These subtitles are arranged in a logical order with introductions and backstory starting in the beginning. The next sections are about what the author has to do in the present to accomplish their goals. The final sections discuss what his future goals and aspirations are and how the author's major will help them. The sections are primaly told without using personal examples which is understandable as the author is a Freshman at MSU. To compensate for this, author uses information cited from many sources such as books and interviews to present all information which may convince someone to select a major in Management. These sources are all written in the correct format according to MLA.

   Though the conclusion is short, it is able to wrap up the essay effectively. It summarizes the author's interest in the supply chain and explains why they wanted to select this major at MSU. Projected towards an audience of incoming Freshmen, this essay is easy to understand. It not only explains why students should choose Supply Chain in layman's terms, but it also presents them in a logical and clear fashion.